Stream of consciousness at Lake Fingerbone

This is my review of Housekeeping by Marilynne Robinson.

This slim novel is deceptively easy to read – the poetic style and unusual trains of thought require concentration and rereading to get the full meaning. Robinson has a gift for making the ordinary seem extraordinary – for me, this started on page three with the description of the sky reflected in puddles, soon afterwards the experience of something as simple as hanging out sheets. At first, I thought the book would be a kind of eulogy of the apparently mundane pattern of women's lives in rural America (or the whole world), creating satisfaction and dignity in the routine of making jam or rearing children, such as you also find in some of the writing of Jane Smiley and Barbara Kingsolver. Then, as the story became ever more often a stream of consciousness, isolating the narrator Ruth from the "real" world, linking her to the itinerant and recognisably manic aunt Sylvie and to memories or images of the grandfather and mother who have so tragically died in the ever-present Lake Fingerbone, I realised that this is a much more profound study of how parents may unintentionally damage their children, through failure to communicate, or through leaving them, and also about the meaning of life.

Although much of the writing is "exquisite" with striking and original similes, it sometimes seems over-laboured and self-consciously "creative writing". The biblical passages may grate on those who are not believers, but are acceptable as part of the culture of the rural north-west States. I agree with the reviewer who found the narrator Ruth altogether too knowing and perceptive as a young child. At times she enters the head of, say, her deceased grandmother in a way that is implausible, but perhaps realism is not always the author's intention. Despite the minute detail and acuity of many descriptions of sensations, the vivid evocation of the bleak yet beautiful Lake Fingerbone area through the cyclical seasons of snow, ice and flood, and the wit and realism of overheard conversations, most of the main characters remain shadowy in their personalities and motivations. Perhaps one point of the story is the ultimate unknowability of other people. It certainly helps one to empathise with life's drifters, who are too often objects of fear because they remind one that much of the security of life is an illusion.

⭐⭐⭐⭐ 4 Stars

Stone’s Fall

This is my review of Stone’s Fall by Iain Pears.

This evokes memories of Wilkie Collins (insanity and opium) and Daphne Du Maurier's "Don't Look Now" (hints of the supernatural in decaying Venice) although I have to say that both of these authors "did it better". The apparently well-researched and intricate plot contains many sinuous twists with some melodramatic scenes which sit rather oddly between rather dry explanations of the role of the banking system in the survival of late C19 societies – quite prescient since the book was first published in 2008! The structure is also unusual: three separate sections, successively set further back in time, with a different narrator and location, but serving to fill in further gaps to explain the life and death of the financier John Stone. This "back-to-front" approach inevitably saps some of the potential tension and suspense.

Although I understand why this book has been so highly praised, it does not work for me. This is not because many of the characters are not very likeable, and tend to be snobbish, class-conscious and anti-semitic – this is all part of the period covered. One reservation is that the large number of characters paraded before us tend to merge together – it is hard to relate to most of them, and to identify and recall the significant "clues" they may drop. Too much of the tale is reported via these characters, often in implausibly fluent speech. This brings me to the point that, despite their ( I think we are meant to find) very different personalities, the three narrators all use the same "voice": a very articulate, rather cynical, for the most part bloodlessly objective, tone – the author's? And although I think I was meant to be captivated by Stone's wife Elizabeth, I found both her and Louise Cort to be thoroughly unconvincing. Whenever the plot takes a romantic turn, the at other times erudite writing becomes squirmingly Mills and Boonish. Although the plot does hang together, the "denouement" at the end of Part 1 is a bit rushed and confusing (all that stuff about Bob, I mean Jan the Builder). In general, every section seems to have a long, slow, wordy build up to an unduly compressed finale.

I think it would have benefited from a ruthless pruning and editing. Perhaps the huge success of earlier work places the author above the requirement to do this.

⭐⭐⭐ 3 Stars

Love and Summer by William Trevor: “Subtle, skilful and moving”

This is my review of Love and Summer by William Trevor.

Like some other reviewers, I read this in a single sitting and it is the first William Trevor novel I have read. Far from being “old-fashioned”, it was true to life in rural Ireland in the mid C20, as far as I can judge. I liked the realism of it: the focus on the small routines of daily living and the constraints of small-town life. Yet, those of us who live in a very different world may still be able to relate to the nostalgia, the regrets and compromises which in different ways form part of most people’s existence. I also admired the smooth development of the plot towards a sad but convincing finale. I disagree with those who found the book confusing. The juxtaposition of characters’ thoughts, and the way a person might think one thing while saying something else, formed an effective way of conveying the subtlety of human relationships. Through being understated, the emotions in the book were infinitely more powerful. Many possible tragic endings were implied, but the one chosen was right – possibly predictable, but the manner in which it unfolded was not. The characters were all developed as complex people, with shifting attitudes and different relationships between them.

Minor criticisms are that the last chapter was perhaps a little “fey” and some of the demented old Orpen Wren’s monologues did “go on a bit”, although this may be justifiable in the light of the denouement.

If the test of a book is whether it moves you to see the world a little differently, this passes. A moving and superbly controlled piece of writing, on a par with Toibin’s “Brooklyn”, I would have been happy to see this win a prize.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 Stars

Mostly entertaining thud and blunder

This is my review of Instruments of Darkness by Imogen Robertson.

The pace and confident development of the plot in short scenes alternating between the two main locations of London and the countryside suggest the author's familiarity with working on film and radio scripts. I was encouraged to obtain this book by a positive review in "The Guardian", but very soon became uneasy – this seemed a reworking of the murder mystery in an aristocratic household which I have met so many times in a long reading life. Was it really worth reading? The prose seemed to attempt a vaguely Austenish style in keeping with the late C18 setting at the time of the American War of Independence (although the story is set largely in England) but too often the attitudes and speech of the characters and the narrator jarred in sounding too modern. The prose was by turns leaden or purple when it attempted high drama and deeper emotion, and generally clunky, in need of a good edit. The characters were somewhat two dimensional – either cringe-makingly good and noble on one hand, or too obviously branded with a villainous "v" for viper. The key points of the plot were, contrary to the cover blurb, all too predictable, and the climax of the book, again unsurprisingly, over-melodramatic. Romantic relationships and those involving children were saccharine and sentimental. All this was quite frustrating because the story had the potential to succeed as more than a Mills and Boon pot boiler.

I quite liked the rare touches of realism- as when the "good guys" casually sacrificed a dog to test a drink for suspected arsenic, an action which has clearly shocked the sensitivities of some modern readers. Similarly, in the C18 world people could kill others in self defence and then dispose of the bodies in the interests of anatomical studies without involving the police! Some of the best writing was of the horror of the battle scenes. I also thought the epilogue was effective in striking a poignant note, reminding us of how a character who has hovered on the cusp between good and evil thinks he has achieved salvation through the love of a good woman, only to be sucked down by the inevitable reappearance of a blackmailer.

⭐⭐⭐ 3 Stars

The Trespass

This is my review of Trespass by Rose Tremain.

Tightly plotted and well-written as you would expect of the work of a prize-winning author, this is part thriller, part pyschological study of a disparate group of characters in late middle age. The short chapters, which switch between the viewpoints of the main characters seem to lend themselves to the film script which will no doubt follow in due course. The "trespass" can be taken on two levels, the most obvious being the encroachment of middle-class expats on the remote rural area of the Cevennes, drawn by its wild beauty and peace but oblivious to the feeligs of the displaced local people. On a subtler note, the "trespass" is also the unintentional harm caused by parents who ride roughshod over their children's needs, leaving their adult lives blighted – in this unremittingly sad book, this damage applies to all the characters.

At first I was irritated by the contrived opening chapter which seemed to be an exercise in creative writing (a child's eye view of the world – not very relevant to what follows) culminating in a horrific but unexplained incident, clearly intended to retain the reader through the following somewhat unexciting scene-setting chapters. The main characters seemed stereotyped: arrogant gay art dealer obsessed with his mother, horsy lesbian sister, dreamy sensitive French peasant given to epileptic fits and boorish,drunken brother, etc. Gradually, my interest was caught by the interplay between the characters, their different takes on the same situation, etc. All of them, even those who seemed wholly bad or unsympathetic at the outset, revealed redeeming features and some clear development in their outlook by the end of the book.

Although the language occasionally disappoints by touching on the cheesy, I was impressed by some imaginative phrases such as for two drinkers who "sat face to face across a choppy sea of glassware" and by insightful comments about, for instance, memory, growing old, being lonely, and all the characters' changing perception of events.

Although I guessed the climax of the story long before it came, there was a sadly ironic twist at the end. The most poignant aspect was the lack of communication between the ill-used Audrun and her brother Aramon, driven to drown his guilt in alcohol

I have enjoyed other books by Rose Tremain more – The Road Home, The Colour, Restoration etc – I think because they are all more original and probably more ambitious in their scope. They also, as I recall, have a single main character with whom one can more clearly identify. The quality of the writing saves "The Trespass" from being as depressing as it might sound and overall it is a successful example of what you might call accessible literary fiction.

⭐⭐⭐⭐ 4 Stars

A Tall Story?

This is my review of The Long Walk: The True Story of a Trek to Freedom by Slavomir Rawicz.

Initially taking this tale at face value, I felt that I should take a positive view of it out of respect for the courage of the escaped political prisoners who showed such resourcefulness and persistence in their determination to survive. However, although it was relatively short and easy to read, I found the book all too easy to put down. This was partly because the incidents which would have been full of tensions and mishaps in a self-confessed adventure story were so straightforward: the escapees scaled prison walls without attracting notice, no dogs pursued them, everyone they met was friendly and gave them food, when hunger drove them to steal and slaughter an animal it all went without a hitch, and so on. Admittedly half the group died on the way, but I am not introducing a spoiler here: the author removes all suspense by telling us in the completely unnecessary chapter headings listed in the contents page how many people died and where. "Five By-Pass Lhasa" reminded me of a kind of "Enid Blyton meets Biggles" approach to it all. The characters were all somewhat two dimensional, and the rapid deaths without much warning or build up left me less moved than I should have been.

It could be argued that the lack of real action and personal drama reflected the fact we are dealing with a true story. However, consulting Amazon half-way through my reading, I found comments on the strong evidence that this tale is a pastiche of the story of another man's escape. I have no idea whether this is true or not, but it supported the doubts which had already arisen quite independently. My two first major queries arose over the fact that the narrator was able to repair the camp commandant's radio purely on the happily coincidental basis of having had the same model at home. This gave him convenient access to the commandant's wife, who not only spoke to him with the most surprising informality, but virtually incited him to escape, advised him on how to do so, and contributed to equipping him and his colleages to boot! As other reviewers have commented, the subsequent amazing capacity to cross the Gobi Desert without water, and the sight of the Abominable Snowmen were the final nails in the coffin of my belief. Out of all the characters, Kristina seemed to me to be the least convincing. I wondered if she was created to add a little more drama and was not surprised that she was the first to be eliminated from the tale.

I am sorry if I am misjudging this book.

⭐⭐⭐ 3 Stars

Home

This is my review of Home by Marilynne Robinson.

"Home" is a subtle and moving exploration of relationships between parents and siblings, and the deeply embedded nostalgic memories of one's childhood which return in adult life, perhaps particularly for those who are "less successful", with too much time on their hands. It is written from the viewpoint of Glory, the oversensitive and unworldly youngest daughter of the retired Reverend Boughton, for whom she has returned to care in his old age after the collapse of her long, clearly doomed engagement. Unexpectedly, after an absence of twenty years, her brother Jack also returns home, an outsider, an alcoholic drifter from his youth, yet still retaining the power to attract people with his charm and flashes of perceptiveness. The human flaws and contradictions in the main characters held my interest – not least the pious yet manipulative old father, who in some distorted way loved his most wayward son the most, because he provided a "real cross to bear". There was also the inference that Jack's questioning agnostic spirit had somehow been crushed by the stifling religion of his upbringing. I enjoyed the implication that Jack, concerned about the race riots in the south, was less prejudiced than his godly father who had not thought to question the bigotry in which he had been raised.

Although this book could have been unbearably sad, this was countered by the wry humour of Glory's private thoughts, and by some drily witty dialogue.

I sympathise with some of the reservations of other readers. Having made its point, the book did "go on a bit" although you could argue that it reflected the slow rhythm of life in rural Iowa. In the same vein, the focus on the minute details of living – cooking, cleaning and maintaining clothes when one is very poor, gave the book realism. I also liked the way in which some key facts are touched upon so delicately that you could miss them if you tried to read too fast, or did not trouble to "tune in" to the wording, which is quite convoluted at times, almost "nineteenth century" in style yet very lucid at other points.

It is true that the self-absorption of the three main characters was wearing at times. There were a few practical queries. Wouldn't Jack's sudden appearance after twenty years have created more of an impact? Surely the siblings would have come flooding back to see him? If their respected old father was fading into senility wouldn't that have brought them back as well?

The book dragged somewhat in the middle for me. As relations between Glory and Jack improved I feared I was reading a kind of Polyanna-cum-Little Women for adults. Jack's reputation for being an alcoholic and a thief seemed a little exaggerated. But the tension from Glory's ongoing dread over her brother's imminent downfall was proved justified. The pace improved towards the end with an effective final twist, although I felt that Glory's final observations were a little schmalzy.

This is a well-written and thought-provoking book which encourages me to read "Gilead" although on a superficial view the latter appeals to me less. Although "Home" can be enjoyed by an agnostic/atheist I am not sure the same can be said for Gilead…..

⭐⭐⭐⭐ 4 Stars

“The Girl Who Played with Fire” (Millennium Trilogy Book 2) by Stieg Larsson – Something lost in translation?

This is my review of The Girl Who Played with Fire (Millennium Trilogy Book 2) by Stieg Larsson.

The opening chapters diverted me from the tedium of sitting on an airport runway for three hours waiting in vain for the plane to obtain a slot to fly round a cloud of volcanic dust. The complex plot wound its way to a suitably shocking and unpredictable ending, and although I do not share the widespread admiration for the “spiky and sassy” anti-heroine Lisbeth Salander, I was left with sufficient curiosity as to her fate to feel motivated to tackle the final part of the trilogy in the next few weeks.

So, with these positive initial reflections, what were the reservations which made me wonder at several points whether this much-hyped book was really worth reading? It certainly needs a thorough edit, with a few passages which I swear do not make sense, and a tendency to read at some points like research notes for the novel rather than the final work itself. I have no objection to a large cast of characters, but the tendency to switch from the viewpoint of one to the next makes for jerky reading, and I would have liked a brief list of names and roles for quick reference where the unfamiliar Swedish names/personalities/roles of bit part players were rather similar. Also, some characters seemed to “drift out of the frame” after what seemed to be unduly lengthy introductions.

My main beef is that the book is frankly badly written at many points, although to be fair to the author I wonder to what extent this is due to a translator with a cloth ear for language. The large number of short scenes, conveying the impression that the structure was created with filming in mind, suggest that quality of writing was never a major consideration.

By the standards of popular pulp fiction, this probably deserves the high praise it has received in Amazon reviews so far. Perhaps I was misled into thinking this trilogy is more of a “work of literature” than it is by the first part, which seemed to have a strong mission to expose corruption, and conveyed a sense of the tensions in Swedish society and a rounded central character in the journalist Kalle Blomkvist. In this section, the (for me) slightly ludicrous aspects of Salander’s extraordinary gifts for computer hacking and manipulating unlikely victims play a much larger part. Together with the increased level of sadistic violence in the book, it held less appeal for me.

Whereas the first part involved working out the riddle behind a series of murders, this second part was a little disappointing in that revelations towards the end came in the form of explanations from key characters or summarising from a report.

However, I am clearly in a minority……

⭐⭐⭐ 3 Stars

Desert

This is my review of Désert (Collection Folio) by Le Clezio.

This book has just been published in English, and I would be interested to see how it translates. (As an English speaker, I laboured through it in French, with a handful of phrases for which I could not work out the sense.)

I doubt whether any translation (except perhaps one by the bilingual author) can do justice to the language, which is like a long, rhythmic, hypnotically repetitive free verse poem about the harshly beautiful infinity of the desert to which man must adjust, for it makes no concessions. The lives of the nomads, barren existences of grinding poverty in the initial estimation of a privileged westerner, are in fact shown to have a dignity and sense of community, in balance with nature.

The narrative switches between 1909-12, when the desert warriors, the men in blue veils, are making their last abortive stand against the Christian imperialist invaders of North Africa, and the late C20 where the North Africans live a debased life in the coastal shanty towns – debased since they are desperately poor, but have lost contact with their old culture of desert-based nomadic self-sufficiency – and dream of life in great cities like Marseilles. Each thread focuses on a particular individual – in the earlier period, a young boy called Nour follows the ill-fated trek north across the desert to the sea in the wake of the charismatic leader Ma el Ainine, rendered ineffectual by age and his inadequate resources to fight the westeners with their artillery.

Nour's modern-day descendant is Lalla, the beautiful young girl, fascinated by and in tune with the desert, who nevertheless makes the journey to Marseilles where she is thrown into the squalid life of the immigrant scraping a living in a corrupt and ugly city which is portrayed as another type of desert, until her life is transformed in a way that I cannot reveal for fear of creating a "spoiler" except to say that I found it implausible and could not see how it added to the tale.

The book often frustrated me in its slow pace. Small details observed in passing, or the "greater scheme of things" seem more important than a strong plot line and well-developed series of interactions and events. Perhaps this is intentional, all part of a contemplative, spiritual focus which appears to be Le Clezio's main concern. The narrative speeds up with more moments of real pathos and drama towards the end – crises of life and death – but some of the significant events and characters on the way are underdeveloped – again, this may may be deliberate, since the book is mostly about the ambience and power of desert places. Given the missed opportunities for engagement between the main characters, I was struck by the way Le Clezio seems to have made an exception in the over-romanticised portrayal of Lalla.

Despite these apparently strong reservations, this book will stay with me, in terms of the evocative power of the language and the vivid visual images it conjured up of the desert landscapes in various lights, and of the nomads. Le Clezio describes the relatively few events of this book, people's thoughts and sensations, in minute detail. In so doing, he makes the reader more self aware, more attuned to the details of his or her own surroundings…..

⭐⭐⭐⭐ 4 Stars

Keynes Return of the Master

This is my review of Keynes: The Return of the Master by Robert Skidelsky.

This provides some thought-provoking perspectives on, for instance, the collapsed credibility of the discipline of economics which failed to foresee the recent financial crisis- Skidelsky attributes this to a narrow focus on mathematics rather than the broader ethical, philosophical, historical context within which Keynes operated. This led Keynes to change his mind on the benefits of free trade after experiencing the trauma of the Great Depression. Perhaps wishing to have it all ways, he favoured an international approach to the world of arts which he loved, but came to advocate a measure of protection to encourage countries to manufacture their own goods, even if others could do it more efficiently.

Although this book inspired me to resolve to read a longer and more detailed work on Keynes, it left me feeling a little disappointed. The structure seemed disjointed, as the text switched back and forth in time, with sections written under subheadings in the manner of a text book, but without the systematic approach this normally entails. I was uncertain as to the intended audience. Surely a lay reader with no prior knowledge of Keynes would be confused by the half-explained theory, such as the role of interest rates in equating savings and investment, but not necessarily at the full employment level?

I would have preferred the key points of this book to be presented in a meaty essay, rather than have to tease them out of a somewhat unfocused book.

⭐⭐⭐ 3 Stars